Round 1: Write the opening sentence of your novella

Unexistent world with odd colors, heavy air and acid rain, every kind of pollution, corruptions, and the craziest nightlife of the surface and the underground of the Earth, some say it’s the best, some say it’s the worst, I say it’s Electric City, the alive and imaginary metropolis, the city that cries nails of smoke, the concrete cancer that infects thoughts in people’s head, She, She that always calls you back, with her sexy voice and her symphony of noises, my beautiful and toxic Majesty.

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2 Responses to “Round 1: Write the opening sentence of your novella”

Jodi Cleghorn Says:
August 18, 2009 at 12:23 am

I’m not one given over to enjoying long rambling sentences but this has style and grace. It is well constructed and conjures an interesting world which I can’t wait to see expand. Anything could happen here and probably will. Bravo!

You can find my opening sentence at http://jodicleghorn.wordpress.com/2009/08/14/fourth-fiction-opening-sentence/

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Annasbones Says:
August 19, 2009 at 1:50 pm

Great opening!! can’t wait for Round 2 :)

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